I am a shiny diamond necklace I am always there But some times you can't see I guide you when you don't know the way I live an endless number of years Yet i die like everyone else what am I?
(Highlight below for answer) A star
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HA! I guessed it! I was right! I knew it was a star! I like the part about guiding people. I've never had to use them that way but I love to look at them. I hope there will always be stars to look at.
I got it right! That was good. I wasn't sure that it was a..... well, if I say, then others might look. Well, that was pretty good metaphorage. Twas sweet.
I didn't get it until I looked at the answer. This is a really pretty poem, though. I like the "I live an endless number of years/Yet I die like everyone else" part. It adds more depth to an already-deep poem... Keep up the great writing!
HAHAHA I GUESSED IT RIGHT....even though i kinda already knew it but oh well. That was a really awesome poem. I'm not that creative. I like how you said that it was a shiny diamond necklace. Keep up the good work.
6 comments:
HA! I guessed it! I was right! I knew it was a star! I like the part about guiding people. I've never had to use them that way but I love to look at them. I hope there will always be stars to look at.
I got it right! That was good. I wasn't sure that it was a..... well, if I say, then others might look. Well, that was pretty good metaphorage. Twas sweet.
I didn't get it until I looked at the answer. This is a really pretty poem, though. I like the "I live an endless number of years/Yet I die like everyone else" part. It adds more depth to an already-deep poem... Keep up the great writing!
-Cassie
Yes, I got it right. The guiding people part was good. At first I thought it was the milky way. The dieing part was good to. Cool blog.
HAHAHA I GUESSED IT RIGHT....even though i kinda already knew it but oh well. That was a really awesome poem. I'm not that creative. I like how you said that it was a shiny diamond necklace. Keep up the good work.
Wow, I actually had no idea. I feel really stupid. That was good. Mine was really easy. Well, see you later.
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